WWW; your Q4 answer shows some potential but i think the main positive to take from this assessment is that its a useful wake up call if we seriously call if we seriously want to reach the top grades

EBI; in Q4, you need more depth and detail to reach the top levels... what about the other side of the argument

      questions   mark

1. 1mark
2. 0
3. 0
4. 9

I could of achieved more marks in the 4th question if i wrote in more depth and included views and facts from another perspective. I wasn't able to complete question 3 as I was not in the lesson due to a PE exam that I had on that day. That's what let me down the most in the assessment.